Write a research paper on social media’s impact on the food industry.I just need you to edit the essay with the professor feedback.

This is the feedback: There a few moments that the paper feels little shallow (where you skim over certain ideas, but could expand and go deeper into it).

I think that editing or revising to focus on marketing/business/consumer OR democratization/diversifying culture in food would help it feel a little more cohesive.

See the attached file for my in-text feedback.

Also, I will attach a feedback document from the professor.

IMPORTANT NOTE! Please Don’t use hard words that is not common for second language write.